Tuesday, 7 November 2017

M1 Work


The protagonist of my screenplay is a Hitman named Jack wilkinson, a hitman hired to take out a target for a client but goes wrong. My protagonist is described to be a middle aged man with black hair wearing a black suit. The audience appeal of my protagonist will be good in someways and bad in others as his is a killer however he is taking down a bad organisation which puts him in a good light.

The sporting characters in my screen play are; Jack's friend, a retired hitman around 45 years old that turns Jack down at the start but comes back to help jack in his final moments and is killed when doing so. The Antagonist for my screenplay is a Mob Boss named Antonio Falcone he is at the head of the Falcone crime family and the Italian Mafia he is a large man around 50 years old with grey hair a gold cross hung around his neck and a shirt with the top 3 buttons undone. There is also a series of mob members, all male aged between 18-25 with all different features.

The main plot points of my screen play are as follows: The Hitman is hired to take out a target and after killing him realises he is a member of the Italian mob, the hitman then calls his client and goes to his house and kills him in a fit of rage.  His house is then invaded and he kills the men forcing him to leave his house. He calls his friend but is denied so camps in an abandoned warehouse. the men find him and he is knocked out. He escapes his restraints and gets into a firefight receiving help from his friend. his friend is killed and he is shot. after a talk with the antagonist the screen goes black and a gunshot is heard.



Actions/directions: I have used actions and directions in my script to describe to the director what is happening in each scene so they may direct it in there way and also for the actors so they can know how to act out each given scene.

Extensions: i have used extensions in instances when a character is for example whispering so that it is clear how the line is scripted to be put across.

Formatting: i have used the Warner Bros script template for to format of my screenplay this is so that all of the lines for example speech or action lines are in the correct position on the page. it also insures that the script sticks to the one page per on screen minuet by using the font size of 12 and the correct font with the correct paragraph spaces.

When inputting a characters name the name is put in CAPITAL letters. this is done because when the actor is reading the script it stands out and the actor can see where there part comes in.

Action is written like on a normal page and in the correct font this is done so that the film can line up with the time (one page = one min) and so that it is easy to read and understand by the director.

When you put in dialogue this moves to the centre of the page. the reasoning for this is so the the actors can easily separate the action from the dialogue so they know when to speak and what to say.

Scene headings are written at the right side of the page to clearly separate it from the rest of the screenplay.

Timing: My brief was to create a 10 min or less short film and sticking to the format i have kept my screen play shorter than 10 pages so that it doesn't exceed the run time i have been allowed.

Tuesday, 31 October 2017

Unit 22 Teacher Feedback 31 October



Crime Idea Feedback:


- Good knowledge of genre
- Possibly too much narrative
- Actors could be hard to find regarding age and availability
- Simplify the plot and remove unneeded scenes that don't add to the plot of the film



Audience Research Survey Results



As you can see by question one the market my survey was intended to go to was between the age of 16 and 18 and this is the age rating I will try to appeal to in my short film.








Question two shows us that the people that did my survey were predominantly male so this is who I will direct my film towards as that is the main ender I have received my answers from.








Question three has shown that only 17.65% of the people that did my survey have not seen any of the given films that all share the same style/genre. This is a small percentage so should not effect the style of film I am waning to




Question four tells us that the audience for my short film likes violence in the films they watch.




Question five shows that people believe a structured plot/ story line s very important




Question six shows that people enjoy the film better if they can connect with the character this is probably because they can feels empathy for the character and also put them selves in their shoes.




Question seven shows us that just cover 70% of linear story line




On question eight the majority of people






Market Research Survey Results










Monday, 30 October 2017

Crime Idea Developed



Crime idea- developed


Working Title:


il cavaliere


Running Time:


Approx. 10 mins


Genre:


Crime / Action


Target Audience:


16-40 years old


Logline:


He’s not the Boogeyman. He’s the man you send to kill the Boogeyman.


Characters:


Protagonist- Hitman


Hitman’s friend


Antagonist- Italian mob boss


Henchmen- mob members (Gangsters/Guns for hire)


Cast:


 


Protagonist- 35-40 years old


Sidekick- 35-40 years old


Antagonist- 40-50 years old


Henchmen- 18-30 years old


 


Plot-


Start-Ending scene first, captured impossible looking situation, at abandoned TB hospital (Flash of images, loud noises, discomfort)


Scene2-snapto alarm clock noise, focus on alarm clock pan to man in bed, waking up


Scene3-gettting ready scenes (brushing teeth getting gun, getting shower etc.)


Scene4-phone call from client regarding a ‘job’


Scene5-meet client (Park bench) talk to client about details regarding earlier phone call but don’t appear to be talking. Client leaves envelope in a newspaper on the bench and walks away.


Scene6- goes home and looks at envelope containing information on target and creates an information board on the man (work, personal relationships, address etc.) (tense music)


Scene7-visit locations to scout area (show flash forward in black and white to the murder of the target)


Scene8- hitman talks to client regarding money transfer and when the hit will take place 


 Scene9-gear up with guns and other equipment


Scene10- target killed when walking up side ally way (next to bandstand in Ilkley)


Scene11- Hitman finds out that the man the hit was on is part of the Italian mafia and confronts the client for withholding the information. Argument breaks out so he kills the client in anger. 


Scene12- hitman’s house is invaded and he kills all the men sent to kill him


Scene13- hitman asks his friend to help him out and asks for a place to stay but is declined so goes into hiding at abandoned building and plans further plans


Scene14- mob finds out his location and goes to kill him.


Scene15- hitman caught off guard and knocked out.


Scene16- hitman up on the stage with bag over his head hands tied behind his back and kneeling on a large sheet of clear plastic.


Scene17- hitman begins to pull a small blade from the bottom of his shoe and starts to cut to rope his hands are tied together with, hitman’s friend comes to help and kills one of the Hench men. Hitman unties himself removes the bag on his head and uses the blade to kill a man and takes his gun.


Scene18 (finally) - Mob boss tries to flee the scene but is caught by hitman and his friend and begs for his life. Hitman kills the mob boss. They both walk away together and the film ends


 


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Hitman:


            Name: Jack Wilkinson.


            Personality: calm, quiet, highly skilled.


            Appearance: wears suit


Mob Boss:


                Name: Antonio Falconie.


                Personality: greedy, easily angered, strong Italian accent.


                Appearance: Old, Grey hair.


 

Thriller Idea Developed


Thriller/Torture Porn idea- Developed

Working Title:

Spiked

Running Time:

 Approx. 10 minuets

Genre:

Thriller / Torture Porn

Target Audience:

Male Young Adults

Logline:


Riddle Me This

Characters:

Ben
Sam
Will
Aalyan
Nathan

Cast:

Ben - Ben
Sam - Sam
Will - Will
Aalyan - Aalyan
Nathan - Nathan


Main Character Profile(s):

Ben:  Short, Blond hair, The group joker
Sam: Tall, Brown hair, Tends to be moody
Will: Tall, Blond hair, dopey and unaware
Aalyan: Average height, Black hair, immature
Nathan: Tall, Blond hair, quiet

Plot points:

- Boys go to a party together and there drinks are spiked they all start to feel off and collapse
- The Boys wake up in an unknown location and are confused about how they got there
- A mysterious voice speaks to them from the darkness telling them who he is (The riddler)
- The Riddlers calling card is cutting a question mark out of the skin of his victims foreheads
- The game is explained to the boys, they must answer riddles in order to pass the stage and if the riddle is answered wrong one of them will be chosen at random and murdered.
- The boys complete the riddles so there is only 2 of them left.
- The boys are put into a room by themselves and they cannot see or hear each other.
- Will is in the room with the controls and ben is in an empty room
- The riddler explains the game to them (Will can choose to kill himself and save Ben or he can kill Ben and save himself)
- will choses to kill Ben and save him self however it was a twist and when he clicks to kill ben it actually kills him.